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 # Wiggle World
 
 Wiggle World is just a toy about shape and motion. I thought of it one
-day while watching ducks and turtles at a local pond.  As the ducks
-emerged from the water, their butts would wiggle back and forth
-without the rest of their body seeming to move. As turtles sank deeper
-into the water, I noticed that their features faded as the depth
-increased. Eventually I could see only vague blobs drifting in and out
-of patches of light.  
-
-Shapes and light and motion.  I thought might be fun to draw some
-shapes and whatch them drift and shift and wiggle.  So that's what
-does.
+day while watching ducks and turtles at a local pond.  
+
+As ducks emerged from the water, their butts would wiggle back and
+forth, seemingly independant of the rest of their bodies. If you've
+ever seen a duck shake off some damp, you'll know what I mean.
+
+As turtles sank deeper into the water, I noticed that their features
+faded as their depths increased. Eventually, I could see only vague
+blobs with stumpy limbs drifting in and out through patches of light.  
+
+Shapes and light and motion are what I was watching that day at the
+pond.  I thought might be fun to make a toy that lets a person draw
+some shapes in order to watch them drift and shift and wiggle.  So
+that's what Wiggle World does.
 
 Hope you [enjoy it](https://cbeo.github.io/wiggle-world)!