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Is just a toy. I thought about it one day while watching turtles and
ducks coasting about in a pond. I noticed how, when the turtles were
-deep enough, I couldn't quite see their features, just their shapes as
-they drifted about. Then I thought, wouldn't it be kinda fun to just
-draw a shape and watch it wiggle?
+deep enough, I couldn't quite see their features. I could just see
+turtle-like shapes as they drifted about. Then I thought, "wouldn't it
+be kinda fun to draw a shape and watch it spring to life?"
Hope you [enjoy it](https://cbeo.github.io/wiggle-world)!